Crouching Tuna

I'm not sure what can I say to help this out. I like it like this already. Maybe I'll just say something I 'wouldn't' want to happen in your next ...

I don't like doing grammar check, so I'll skip that. First of all, the setting. This is some sort of fantasy that you want the reader to know all the ...

Ahha! Who would've thought I'd bump into a fellow Indo by clicking a random title? Well, reading this gave me the feeling when I read the teen Indo novels, but ...

I kind of like it, but I hope this one will have something more than suicidal intentions. I walk along the New York streets alone. I check the windows, seeing ...

Hello, I didn't come too late, right? Where did he go, and why leave me here? Change 'leave' to 'leaving' but that's the only way to move without causing pain ...

Hello, sorry for the very late review @_@ The others already picked out most of the critiques, so mine won't be as long. Gary slowly ambled down the curved, blue ...

Hello. I decided to make a quick review as this is the yet another story that caught my attention. Not too long, not too short, a beginning, and not many ...

Hello. Well, I can't really try to fix the grammars since 3 people beat me to it. Maybe just a few that they may left out. So, here we go! ...